Monday, September 24, 2012

Today you will collect ideas for your Narrative/Descriptive Essay.  You may use one of the following strategies:
 - Brainstorming   -Freewriting   
 -Looping              -Clustering


Begin shaping/prewriting your essay.  Write down the following elements of your essay:
 -Subject   
 -Narrowed Topic
 -Purpose
 -Main Idea
 -Audience

Decide which shaping strategy you want to use.  
Tomorrow we will work on an informal outline.  

Homework:  
Read & Do Rhetorical Analysis Assignment

p. 412-14  "Putting Down the Gun"  The Language of Composition



Writing Exercise: Sentence Combining

Try combining those sentences into three, two, or even just one clear and coherent sentence: in the process of combining, omit repetitive words and phrases (such as "She was") but keep all of the original details.



·         She was our Latin teacher.
·         We were in high school.
·         She was tiny.
·         She was a birdlike woman.
·         She was swarthy.
·         She had dark eyes.
·         Her eyes were sparkling.
·         Her hair was graying.