Dripping with hot fugde and whipt cream, the
children ate banana splitz.
While I can not speak for every one it sure
seems like this year is moving quick.
WE #21-30 and Allegory Projects are due tomorrow.
Here's a sample of Part I, the paragraph which you've already seen, and Part II, the visual, for the word Temptation.
Remember:
Your completed paragraph should be typed in MLA format. It should be evident that you gave careful consideration to explaining your word after having practiced in the various patterns of development. It should not read as if you put something together haphazardly. The same goes for your visual. Your WE 30 can be a messy sketch, but your completed visual should be neat and thoughtfully creative. I am less interested in your ability to draw well as I am in your attention to detail. It should not look as if you put it together at the last minute the day it was due. It should be FINISHED when you walk in the door. You may not be working on it in class or it is late.
Today, you should have received a sentence with either a dangling or misplaced modifier. Your job is to depict the sentence visually for WE #31. Here's an example:
For WE 32, you will need to correct the sentence.
For example, "The children walking down the moonlit path were frightened by the bushes."
