MUG #10

Floating Quote:       Remember: Don't float your quote!!!!

"I have seen people choked before my eyes by spirits" (1086).

Ok:
Danforth says to Proctor, "I have seen people choked before my eyes by spirits" (1086).

Better:
Danforth emphasizes to Proctor that he has "seen people choked before [his] eyes by spirits" (1086).

Even better:
Deluded by the girls' lies, Danforth emphasizes to Proctor that he has "seen people choked before [his] eyes by spirits" (1086).


Voc Test 19 & 20 tomorrow

You should be working on your drafts!  Typed drafts are due Monday.